Thesis Statement (Practice page 29)

BEL 260(Practice page 29).

1. Politicians should utilise the Internet for their election campaigns.
    Points  (a) as it save time and election cost.
                (b) change the way of modern campaign
                (c) as an interesting way to attract teenager and adult voter

Thesis statement :  Politicians should utilise the Internet for their election campaigns as it would save time and the campaign cost itself. Furthermore,it is an interesting way to attract teenager and adult voter and perhaps,change the way of modern campaign in politics.

2. Text messaging has caused the deterioration of proper English usage.
    Points  (a)  as people will get to used it in formal english
                (b) create misunderstanding among new generation and old generation
                (c) revolutionized English thesaurus

Thesis statement : Text messaging has caused the deterioration of proper English usage as people will get to used with it in formal english. This also would revolutionized the English thesaurus itself and lead to misunderstanding between new generation and old generation.

3. With the emergence of multi-purpose phones,iPods and digital cameras may soon be obsolete.
    Points  (a) as it were handy and easy to use in emergency
               (b) packed into one compactable,reliable and fashionable
               (c) affordable at a reasonable price

Thesis statement :  With the emergence of multi-purpose phones,iPods and digital cameras may soon be obsolete since because the multi-purpose phones were so handy and friendly to use in emergency and it also had been designed into one compactable,reliable and fashionable gadget. Plus,the price also much affordable at a reasonable price.